Haiku in reverse

[plunkybug]

Once again she flows and flows
Flowing with the moon
Everything is right again



Slightly rearranged in the proper haiku format...

...but somehow I don't like the way it sounds as much.

Once again she flows
Everything is right again
Flowing with the moon

Comments

[ex-mamarose134.livejournal.com]

this is really beautiful. let's find some non-guy time to chat.

[plunkybug.livejournal.com]

Glad you like it! Non-guy time...ok! :)